Friday 26 July 2019

School Holidays.

In the holidays we went to Blenheim to watch my brothers under 52kg rugby tournament. We stayed in Picton. We did lot's of fun things like walking around the water front, going to the movies, going out to tea and looking through museums. After the rugby tournament we travelled to Christchurch for a family re-union. We caught up with all of my dads side of the family. We then travelled to Fairle where we went skiing and caught up with some more family. Finally we drove all the way home.
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  1. Anonymous26 July 2019 at 11:51

    Kia Ora!
    Sounds Like you had an amazing Holiday!
    My name is Maddison By the way and I go to Yaldhurst Model School or YMS.

    I really liked how you put everything in chronological order that means it was all in time order. It sound super fun.
    What was your favorite part?
    is your favorite sport rugby? DO you play sports like your brother? if so what is it?

    I think to improve this amazing post you could add in eye catching detail. Like pictures color and videos. I think that it would make everything look super amazing!

    I am super glad to hear that you had a great holidays and are now back to learning.
    Thanks and let me know!
    -Maddison.

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  2. Anonymous26 July 2019 at 11:53

    Hi there Honor, my name is Abby and I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School, or YMS for short.

    I like the way you talked about lots of things that had happened in your holiday instead of one thing. It makes the post more interesting.

    This reminds me of a different school holiday where I did some similar things to what you did. The last school holidays I didn't do anything.

    Next time you could include photos or put the writing on a slide and make the front cover super eye catching so more people will choose to comment on your blog.

    Did you have fun?
    What was your favourite part?

    Kind Regards,
    Abby.

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  3. Anonymous26 July 2019 at 11:54

    Hi Honor. It's Mikael from yaldhurst school. I really like how you have said what you did in the holidays. It sounds really run. Next time I think you should try to add some color or photos in. Apart from that I like it.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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