Tuesday 12 May 2020

Writing

This week we had to describe an object without using it's name. Here is mine, can you guess what it is?

The neck's sleek wood finish is as smooth as a freshly polished stone. 
The silvery strings vibrate on a perfect octave.
The head's complex design glimmers in the morning sunlight, causing a faint apricot glow. 

The enpin sighs as it strains to hold up it’s heavy burden,although it’s too proud to make a fuss.  

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  1. Kia Ora Honor this is Arli from Grey Main school I really like your writing you use of words are unique good work keep it up Arli.

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  2. Kia ora Honor, I think you have descibed a cello. Your desriptive language tells me that you love this instrument. Musical instruments are beautiful to look at, touch and play. I am always thrilled to see children learning to play any instrument as not many do so in New Zealand these days.

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    1. kia ora Honor my name is jamie from yladhurst model school I like your writing I like the words you used in your writing

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