Kia Ora! My name is Maddiosn and I am a year 7 student and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
I think that this blog post is EXTRAORDINARY!
I really liked how you have done your work and shared it in a super interesting eye catching way. I think that you have done well in another part because you have separated your works into small chunks one the drain and I think that it made it a lot easier to read.
I think that for you to improve it would be alot better if you write a bit more on top of your work explaining your praises. It would be really helpful and would make it a lot easier to understand.
Hello, Honor my name is Jacob from Yaldhurst Model School, I am a year 8 I really enjoyed reading youré blog post about. Japan this looks really cool to look at I like how you add Pictureś and WOrds in your Blog post.Next time you should add a video in like showing how you speak Japan. Keep up the good work bye.
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddiosn and I am a year 7 student and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
I think that this blog post is EXTRAORDINARY!
I really liked how you have done your work and shared it in a super interesting eye catching way. I think that you have done well in another part because you have separated your works into small chunks one the drain and I think that it made it a lot easier to read.
I think that for you to improve it would be alot better if you write a bit more on top of your work explaining your praises. It would be really helpful and would make it a lot easier to understand.
Kind regards.
-Maddie
Hello, Honor my name is Jacob from Yaldhurst Model School, I am a year 8 I really enjoyed reading youré blog post about. Japan this looks really cool to look at I like how you add Pictureś and WOrds in your Blog post.Next time you should add a video in like showing how you speak Japan. Keep up the good work bye.
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